Seductive Verse Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Seductive Verse

Rating: 3.0


In supple pines this tales unfolds,
A verse where passions are untold,
Between her legs, a subtle lure,
The demise of men from ages past,
A symphony of stars, longing pure.

With every step, a graceful sway,
An enchanting dance, night and day,
The bait displayed, a whispered plea,
A beckoning call, for lonely men to see.

Within those depths, a mystery hides,
A treasure map that fate provides,
A path to pleasures, yet unknown,
In whispered moans, his world undone.

Beware, dear soul, the tempting bait,
A siren's song, a tempting fate,
For in her embrace, love's fire burns,
A passion in ice that's never cured.

Between her legs, a sacred space,
A sanctuary, her divine embrace,
Where souls collide, and hearts entwine,
A dance of love, by her designed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

(cont.) ..Say 'Hi' to your housemate, you I do implore, ..........then for goodness sake pick yourselves up off of the floor! ! ! : ) bri Chocolate? : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

(cont.) Mostly (at times) I racked my brain to answer many Readers' (I'm sure) question: 'What the H++l IS between her legs? ' Could it be Godiva Chocolate, the TV remote, OR my wandering hens' eggs? ? (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

(cont.) ...Yes, I'll give it 3 stars. My judgement IS fair. Don't be a doubting Thomas, and, of pride beware. For we've heard what can follow pride and all, and we'd best (at our age) not have a fall...(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

I was so busy while reading this intriguing poem (OK, 'verse' if you will **) , busy going from 'this isn't my cup of tea' TO...'Maybe she'd let me sit on her knee? ' Parts I liked and others 'not so much', but at all times anxious, her, to touchl. (cont.) .)

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