Wednesday, January 3, 2007

Self Betrayal Comments

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For every shadow seen and heard
the winds change the day.
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Heather Kemper
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Julia A 09 February 2007

Incredibly real emotions. I felt like I was reliving it.

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Zen Bojczuk 03 January 2007

Very powerful poem. Intense and sad.

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Amelie Anonymous 03 January 2007

That was so sad, so intense to read....I can relate to this poem a lot..I feel for you.. Excellent description, this poem really painted a picture in my mind....brought up a lot of feeling......really great work Heather

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H L 03 January 2007

disturbing but suprisingly interesting

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Francesca Johnson 03 January 2007

Intensely disturbing subject matter...... no words to give you here, Heather. Just thoughts.... Fran xxx

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Heather Kemper

Heather Kemper

Oakland, California
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