Wednesday, December 30, 2015

Selfish Parents Comments

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Sometimes when I encounter selfish parents,
My heart flames with fury
Their eyes can reach other continents
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Odnalor Tines
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Manonton Dalan 01 January 2016

they're universal people they weren't treated right when they were growing up

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Kavya . 31 December 2015

good one - and i liked the idea, pg 52 of your favourite book - good, keep the ink flowing!

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Odnalor Tines 11 January 2016

A gratitude for your encouragement 'cause I always think my writing sucks which prevents me from putting down on a paper some ideas that comes in my mind.

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Terry Craddock 30 December 2015

'Sometimes when I encounter selfish parents, My heart flames with fury Their eyes can reach other continents Their own children, they cannot see' loved the first stanza especially

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