Senryu - 301 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 301

Rating: 5.0


some wild thoughts wander
like clouds floating in the sky
the ripples emerge

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 01 September 2018

Let the thoughts roam. Little gives me more joy.

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

Thanks Kelly, this is where we all come to the terms, intellectually and poetically.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2018

Wind carries our thoughts from place to place and through clouds and water gives us back. What a powerful and imaginative writing this is really! A great sharing is done.10

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

Thanks much, we wish to have wings to fly freely and create our own space.

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Dogma Daniman 01 September 2018

Clouds have motivated me. This is a great poem Asim. I like it.

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

And it motivates me as well. Thanks much

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