Senryu - 301 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 301

Rating: 5.0


some wild thoughts wander
like clouds floating in the sky
the ripples emerge

Saturday, September 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 01 September 2018

Let the thoughts roam. Little gives me more joy.

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

Thanks Kelly, this is where we all come to the terms, intellectually and poetically.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2018

Wind carries our thoughts from place to place and through clouds and water gives us back. What a powerful and imaginative writing this is really! A great sharing is done.10

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

Thanks much, we wish to have wings to fly freely and create our own space.

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Dogma Daniman 01 September 2018

Clouds have motivated me. This is a great poem Asim. I like it.

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2018

And it motivates me as well. Thanks much

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