Sunday, November 10, 2013

Senryu 5-7-5- Pretty Jewelry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chancing not my heart
again to pretty jewelry
I've outgrown the ring
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Susy Evelyne 28 November 2013

Love the stylish 'Chancing not my heart again to pretty jewelry'. You tell quite a tale in this excellent little 'haiku' type poem. Let's call it a gem!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 November 2013

Cries of the heart a lovely burst thank you

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 November 2013

We make many mistakes in life. Outgrowing each and carrying on with life is the way to go. Thank you for putting life's philosophy in a few lines.

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Dave Walker 11 November 2013

Short and sweet, we can only grow with the mistakes we make. A great little poem.

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Wahab Abdul 11 November 2013

that good for you that you outgrown the ring....in fact every one should outgrow the unhappy situation..10.

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