Senryu ~ Emptiness. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ Emptiness.

Rating: 4.5


no soldiers on gate
dilapidated castle
empty honeycomb

lotus in a pond
besieged in a murky mud
the roads draped in ice

a struggling silence
in reflection of moonlight
ripple in water

Friday, March 25, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 28 March 2022

You have so brilliantly exemplified emptiness in this exquisite poem. Love the imagery!

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Indira Renganathan 28 March 2022

All the three are lovely....I like the third one the most....5*****

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Poetic Sky 27 March 2022

Raining eyes....symbol of tears.

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Mamta S 27 March 2022

Crafty chain, all in full emptiness.

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