no soldiers on gate
dilapidated castle
empty honeycomb
lotus in a pond
besieged in a murky mud
the roads draped in ice
a struggling silence
in reflection of moonlight
ripple in water
All the three are lovely....I like the third one the most....5*****
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You have so brilliantly exemplified emptiness in this exquisite poem. Love the imagery!