Senryu: Human Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Senryu: Human

Rating: 4.0


am just a woman
love to write kindest poems
flying, running: no!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 31 July 2021

I like the use of flying here, running is not so poetic. Flying has the connotation of bliss, of excellence as in flying high, getting the best out it.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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Jakarta, Indonesia
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