(senryu) Mountain Silence Poem by Bill Galvin

(senryu) Mountain Silence

Rating: 5.0


So remote, quiet…
Like the world is so far off,
And doesn't need us.

Autumn 2016

Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 October 2016

I am a fan of brevity when it is vivid and startling and points out a truth. This poem exemplifies all three! Excellent, excellent, excellent. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Bill Galvin 17 October 2016

Thank you, Susan; much appreciated.

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