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To Our Unparted Spirits

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To Our Unparted Spirits…

Do you remember those first few years?
Every day was so bright and new?
But I had issues and had to leave ‘us’ behind.

It nearly broke your heart, and I almost lost you.

Much to my surprise and joy, you waited;
I then vowed till death would part us; you did, too.

Such a bond of love did we forge over time;
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Wednesday, May 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
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Roseann Shawiak 02 June 2015

This poem is a very precious treasure in that it holds everything that you had together, so tenderly and beautifully in your memories. Your lives together and apart are so inspirational and touching, to have a love so gently woven through the years, kept in your hearts until ready to blossom and brought together for this great event of love. An amazing gift from above, divine in nature, as soul mates you can never part one from the other, even though death has separated you temporarily. Your one time love now lives forever within this treasured poem. Awesome poem Bill, a great tribute to Deb, whom I'm sure keeps it tucked within her spirit until you meet again. Thank you for this glimpse of true love, Bill. RoseAnn

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Bill Galvin 06 June 2015

Thank you for the appreciation. You have a wonderful gift yourself of seeing clearly, interpreting perfectly, and competently expressing it. Thanks again.

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Michael Morgan 27 May 2015

Taking with one hand heaven gives with the other. No one can say who's better off. A moving, forthright poem and a genuine cri de couer. MM

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Bill Galvin 28 May 2015

A truly insightful, helpful, and compassionate comment, Michael. No one can say, indeed. Thanks.

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