M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,528 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu Series ~ 9 (Broken Wings) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The broken wings of
an emperor dragonfly.
Surprise feast for ants.

Fallen from his dreams
reached realities,
now working harder.

with shattered love life,
she took human services,
many lives salvaged.

Topic(s) of this poem: broken

Form: Haiku

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This Senryu deals with a broken wing of a dragon fly.....for ants it is a surprise feast, a loss of someone is gain for another....similarly when the love life ended she devoted her life to serve human and by doing this supreme service many human lives got benefitted.

Comments about Senryu Series ~ 9 (Broken Wings) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (9/7/2015 11:45:00 PM)

    All three are beautiful, the first being the best! A 10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/8/2015 2:30:00 AM)

    Thanks much, I appreciate your comments.......

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  • Sanjukta Nag (9/4/2015 12:18:00 AM)

    Thoughtful.. the poem is a symbol itself.. thank you..10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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