Monday, September 16, 2013

Senryu Series Syllable Count 5-7-5- Ill Winds Comments

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The ill winds of fate
keeps on howling straddling
attacks the sea shore
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Heather Burns
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Dave Walker 17 September 2013

When the storm comes, one can only wait for the calm. A great poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 September 2013

Such a lovely poem for a moment I stood at sea shore and felt the sound and wandered within my thought

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 September 2013

Poem with a great meaning..Yes, very truly said, our life journey itself is full of storms, tide. Only its not heard outside..Loved it.

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Harindhar Reddy 17 September 2013

You called spade a spade - thoughts and troubles are countless of which every human needs to endear in the journey of life (may be ocean of life) . Well written verse by Heather. My regards to her.....

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