Separation Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Separation

Rating: 5.0


It is a beautiful place.....
this mystery of where you are,
full of golden trees
glistening
as the magic Autumn
shines through the day.

You are here, somewhere
amongst the leaves,
walking with the rustle
of my colourful repose,
insecure and searching.

I find your image
sometimes watching mine.
My eyes fall,
a faltering courage
in the lonely time
of separation.....
knowing I cannot
match your silence
with my words.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 05 October 2013

a beautiful touching poem. so sweet the words. great imagery. enjoyed

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Sally P. P. 13 April 2020

Thankyou, Heather, for your very kind comment.

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Flencirose Basera 05 October 2013

Wow I felt the emotion and related to it!

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Sally P.0. 14 April 2020

Thankyou for your reaction Much appreciated. x

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Noreen Carden 14 September 2013

Beautiful poem well done Sally very sweet it catches at the heart well written

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SallyP. P. 14 April 2020

Thanks for your comment, Noreen x

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Lyn Paul 13 September 2013

A sad but beautiful write, expressed so well Thank You

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Sally P. P. 15 April 2020

Thanks Lyn. Nice to hear from you.

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Joseph Anderson 31 August 2013

So sweetly sad-I cannot match your silence with my words is very impactful and gels the whole basic thoughts. A truly great poem -10

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SallyP. P. 15 April 2020

Thankyou, Joseph, your comment is much appreciated.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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