Blossom Mist

Rookie - 6 Points (24 February 1978 / India)

Sept 6 - Poem by Blossom Mist

It was a sunny day of sept 6, when u made my heart tick
We went to a roadside cafe, n sipped on a cold frappe
We talked for hours, sitting by the fragrant flowers
We laughed n we kissed, as the steamer hissed
As you licked on a ice-cream huge, n asked me to be ur muse
I was thrilled, as being on the verge of being killed
You made my heart swell, as I got bewitched by a spell
I said yes n started on a lovely track, never thought of looking back
We started on a journey big, it was a trip that gave us kicks
As the years flew by, u made me feel lovelier by n by
I feel beautiful as I look back n say, on a sunny day of sept 6, u made my heart tick


Comments about Sept 6 by Blossom Mist

  • (1/9/2012 8:09:00 AM)


    By this poem titled Sept 6,
    You actually made my heart tick.
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  • (12/29/2011 8:40:00 AM)


    Yeah John you're right.. The voice is actually my own.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2011 7:35:00 AM)


    I like the way this poem speaks for you, naturally, in a voice that must be your own. Good memories. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 14, 2011


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