Blossom Mist

Rookie - 6 Points (24 February 1978 / India)

Unspoken Love - Poem by Blossom Mist

An Unspoken word, an unsolved mystery.
Our love now seems a long unwritten history.
It’s hard to hide and tough to cry, for you know not how much I try.
Tingles run through my spine, reverberating every inch of mine.
How much I yearn for you to be mine.
But it’s a hopeless barren ravine, plagued by the carcass of my love divine.
My lost love now lays buried in a deep grave.
Its for you and only you I crave.
But be sure it will never be up again.
It will remain unspoken like an illegitimate gain.

Comments about Unspoken Love by Blossom Mist

  • Heather Wilkins (9/15/2014 12:54:00 PM)

    sometimes a love must remain unspoken lovely writing (Report) Reply

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  • (1/14/2012 1:23:00 AM)

    a real feeling of the lost love and its intensity.............great write dear friend........10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    Extreme feelings portrayed to the extreme best.. Love it.. (Report) Reply

  • Sakib Choudhury (11/17/2011 6:18:00 AM)

    A nice poem. Has depth to it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 17, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 19, 2011

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