Serious Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

Serious

Rating: 3.0


Serious

They speak serious,
And I am too tired!

Made my mind,
I will change!

Must start counting hair,
Eyebrows, noses, ears,
Bald or long, also heads,
To armpits and bare chest,
And areola, both nipples!

They speak serious,
And I am too tired!

Like monkey, I sit there,
Keep searching for lover,
Want to joke with others.

They speak serious,
I seek fun, am tired!

Soon, I will change trend,
Amuse me, counting hair,
Inside the underwear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 17 July 2021

You wrote this and yes. But it`s hard to deduce what all this counting signifies or has to do with the poem as whole. yes, they speak serious and you are tired, but so what? You need more here to make it work

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