Shade Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Shade

Rating: 4.2


Face of the sky fades in lake
When tears of clouds start to shower
Scrambling the images of my soul
To be under a shade

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 03 November 2011

Yet again you are poems are sizzling my fellow poet. The way you express shows your command over poetry. I think you are big figure in poetry like one Shelley! just wait for time to garland you. Till then take wear a garland which i am sending you now. Hey pal, did it reach you......ha! ha! ha! 'When tears of clouds start to shower'

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

Serene, and very thought provoking. I like this one a lot, great writing.

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Reality bites the free thinking as nature but people should carry themselves on beyond this threat..Well said words

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