Shadow Play Poem by indira babbellapati

Shadow Play

Rating: 5.0


one after the other
the pretentions're
cast away like
ill-fitting clothes

clothes
pretentions
lie scattered

the walls of the night
are painted with
the two shadows
in a single colour

25sep2009
23.06hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 25 September 2009

clothes pretentions lie scattered the walls of the night are painted with shadows in a single colour Lovely piece Indira.....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009

a postmodern sweet smell in this piece! excellent! 10+

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 9/28/2009 9: 33: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: shadow play Interesting play on words. I like the association with clothes.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 27 September 2009

'night', 'painted'; 'shadows' 'colour', ma'am, u've blended these immiscibles in a fantastic way to produce some delightful imagery and emotion. loved it. thank you.

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Rakesh Bedi 25 September 2009

.....two shadows painted in one color.......; to me it is deeply thought provoking, indira......

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lots can be said about this piece.. the most important of which is.. I Like it..hehe

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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