one after the other
the pretentions're
cast away like
ill-fitting clothes
clothes
pretentions
lie scattered
the walls of the night
are painted with
the two shadows
in a single colour
25sep2009
23.06hrs
From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 9/28/2009 9: 33: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: shadow play Interesting play on words. I like the association with clothes.
'night', 'painted'; 'shadows' 'colour', ma'am, u've blended these immiscibles in a fantastic way to produce some delightful imagery and emotion. loved it. thank you.
.....two shadows painted in one color.......; to me it is deeply thought provoking, indira......
lots can be said about this piece.. the most important of which is.. I Like it..hehe
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
clothes pretentions lie scattered the walls of the night are painted with shadows in a single colour Lovely piece Indira.....