Shadows On The Wall Poem by Lora Colon

Shadows On The Wall

Rating: 5.0


I'm watching two shadows on the wall,
They're standing very close;
It's a man and a woman facing each other,
He's offering her a rose;

She puts out her hand and then hesitates,
She's not sure what to do;
It's a tainted rose from a man she trusted,
He's confessing to being untrue;

I see tears rolling down her face
As her hands fall to her side;
He tries to get closer, but she backs away,
O, damn her foolish pride!

She's talking to him and wiping her tears
As she points toward the door;
He bows his head, and as he turns to go
The rose falls to the floor.

Now her shadow stands alone on the wall,
She'll stand there for eternity;
I remember it like it was yesterday -
Those shadows of you and me.

If I had the chance to do it again,
I'd accept the rose and forgive;
Now I'm just a shadow of a woman
Without a reason to live.

Learn a lesson from this, dear friend,
We all make mistakes, and we fall;
Learn to forgive, or you'll be like me
Recalling shadows of love on the wall.

Friday, March 29, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela lutwyche 29 September 2020

It's so true to so many. It's a brilliant poem.

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2020

I would leave a comment if PH would let me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! : (

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2020

" It's a tainted rose from a man she trusted, He's confessing to being untrue; " i wonder in what way he was " untrue" . Hmm? true tale OR tall tale? ? the whole poem rates MyPoemList and the ending made me think: " WOW! ! " bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 15 March 2014

'If I had the chance to do it again, I'd accept the rose and forgive; ' - Thanks for this great message of forgiveness. 'Learn a lesson from this, dear friend, We all make mistakes, and we fall; Learn to forgive, or you'll be like me Recalling shadows of love on the wall.' - This is cool! Very soothing. Beautiful message.10/10.

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Adeline Foster 04 April 2013

A good poem with a moral. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

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Missouri - United States
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