Thursday, April 19, 2012

Shake And Shimmy! Comments

Rating: 5.0

shake and shimmy,
rattle and roll.
cant nobody
steal my soul.
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Eric Cockrell
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Smoky Hoss 24 April 2012

Elvis would be proud of you my friend! ! ! Great one for sure.

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Blue Dragonfly 22 April 2012

Hi Eric, when I read the title I hurried to grab a seat for some belly dancing... hrrmmph (clearing throat) ... But instead enjoyed some grand thoughts you share here as usual..... and I love the last four lines.... Great to see you are still passionately giving of your art..........

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Dave Walker 20 April 2012

like it, it would sound great with some chords put to it. a great write.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 April 2012

you cant sell what you dont own. you cant make right out of wrong. Well written lines! Eric, but please do not walk around singing the other lines! think about life and think about fresh flowers! !

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Eric Cockrell 19 April 2012

got the idea from an old blues song... walking around singing this one!

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