Thursday, October 7, 2010

She Comes Through The Meadow Yonder Comments

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SHE comes through the meadow yonder,
Her face is turned to the west,
And I divine how her clear eyes shine
With the light of a lasting rest;
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Dollie Radford
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Lucas Aquino 03 February 2016

Lovely! Thanks for the share.

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Susan Williams 03 February 2016

The rhymes and the repetitions gives even more charm to this poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 February 2016

A perfect melody in a beautifully penned short and sweet poem narrating manifestation of natural splendor. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 February 2016

Turned to the west! Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 03 February 2016

Very nice poem. I like the internal rhyme in some of the lines. And I DIVINE how her clear eyes SHINE Her spirit WAITS at the western GATES

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