Tuesday, November 17, 2009

She Could Have Been The Best... This World's Ever Seen Comments

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She lies at home, all alone on her bed
She was gonna go out, but she stayed in instead
She lies alone, thinking, killing herself
With no care for nobody or anything else
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Christopher's Dead
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Jennifer Cramer 25 April 2010

you're right. our poems are a lot alike good poem

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I agree with Jenna Jones, this would make a good song.

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Lexi Zamora 20 December 2009

wow this is really good i understand how she felt.. ive been in that situation where i would do anyhting to not feel the pain

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dymon sidebottom 10 December 2009

wow this wuz simply amazing i really got wut u were saying bout the girl

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Jenna Jones 21 November 2009

hmmm this would make a good song... 10++

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