poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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She Didn'T Come

I waited but she did not come
Eyes stared in one direction to welcome
No trace of her and generating heat
Heart almost missed and skipped a beat

I saw in her a very good friend
It seemed relation will never end
We may walk for miles hand to hand
We developed relation with positive trend

I slipped into memory and saw her smile
Agony and anxiety vanished for a while
Ears were not used to listen to sweet voice
I sank deeper as had no other choice

She remained with me at every turn
Aroused the passion with nothing to burn
She aired the surrounding with melodious song
flown with clipped wing as something went wrong

Wind blew in haste almost touching her curly hair
Sweet fragrance spread across mildly in air
Red cheeks shined on face with colour fair
I couldn’t believe eyes ………………….

Was this sign of betrayal?
Should I not wait for her arrival?
May there be some special reason?
I feared a rain out of season

I did not cry and tried to weep
Sought the reason to remain calm and keep
Not to seek anything in return
Brave front for making “U” turn

I consoled self and heaved a sigh
Emotions emerged and ran very high
She may have some reasons to hide
Not necessary for all moves to disclose and confide

I thought of putting self aside
She may not be by my side
Her memory may last and suffice
Can’t I make little sacrifice

Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2009

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  • Sejal Kapadia (11/3/2009 8:04:00 AM)

    I waited but she did not come
    Eyes stared in one direction to welcome
    No trace of her and generating heat

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  • Pami Panchal (11/1/2009 8:10:00 PM)

    I waited but she did not come
    Eyes stared in one direction to welcome

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  • Connie TalladaConnie Tallada (11/1/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    I did not cry and tried to weep
    Sought the reason to remain calm and keep... i love this lines, it shows so much strength to carry on

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  • Chetna Purohit (11/1/2009 1:04:00 AM)

    I waited but she did not come
    Eyes stared in one direction to welcome

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  • Ashley Paul (10/31/2009 9:34:00 PM)

    waited but she did not come
    Eyes stared in one direction to welcome
    No trace of her and generating heat.............alas she didnot come.... very bad things to happen....10

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