nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

She Waits At A Stopover Of My Unfinished Journey - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

It's very hard to understand her dialects of the talking eyes
And the hidden dumb heart.
That really brings me confusion.
What she requests either love, sex and life or something else?
Oh! I was chained and I cannot move even an inch from this barricade.


Comments about She Waits At A Stopover Of My Unfinished Journey by nimal dunuhinga

  • (11/3/2007 4:48:00 PM)


    This one is open to a myriad of interpretations - but at its core is a questioning mind and a compassionate heart. How difficult it is sometimes to interpret unspoken cues from beautiful eyes. I agree with Sandra - an enigmatic piece. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

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  • (11/3/2007 5:36:00 AM)


    Fascinating, enigmatic...Perhaps, a riddle that cannot be answered easily. Your title is very original. Excellent, Nimal.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 3, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011


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