She Was Not Into Me Yet Poem by MUSAWIR RAAKH

She Was Not Into Me Yet

Rating: 4.5


Far away on the British LAND
There lived my love, where I was BANNED
Always wanted to show her HAND
If we had met, moon had SET
But she was not into me YET

Her eyes brown, her color BLACK
With white heart, where I LACK
Wish I could know code to CRACK
Here I stand with eyes WET
But she was not into me YET

But with the passage of TIME
She found amusing my love RHYME
Changed her heart's feeling CLIME
By that time I had LEFT
But she was not into me YET

She still misses the best PART
No one to sort as I DEPART
Lies somewhere deep in HEART
I would love to settle the DEBT
But she was not into me YET

She Was Not Into Me Yet
Saturday, October 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Great depiction of the woman who has a place in your heart, but as yet has not found one in hers for you. Melancholy poem with a dim hope of coming together in the future, it is beautifully sad. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Musawir Raakh 28 October 2015

Thank you so much for your kind reviews dear Roseann shawiak,

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Anita Sharma 23 October 2015

Far away on the British LAND There lived my love, where I was BANNED Always wanted to show her HAND If we had met, moon had SET But she was not into me YET.................A fine portrayal of the eternal woman of your dreamland, i wish could send you a dream boat could take you far away to British land and settle all the debts... loved & liked

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