Pain Poem by MUSAWIR RAAKH

Pain

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HOW LONG WOULD I OBTAIN
PAIN AND JUST PAIN

NEVER TASTED A DROP OF GLEE
BUT OFTEN SHOWERS IN SORROWS' RAIN

NEVER FELT A WARM TOUCH
BUT HARSH WORDS, USED TO STRAIN

WOULD THAT DIED WHEN CHILD
WOULD'VE NOT DYING IN CHAIN

HEART DEAD PEOPLE AROUND ME
TAKING MY EMOTIONS FOR INSANE

AAH! LIFE WOULD'VE BEEN BEAUTIFUL
BY MY SIDE, SHE WOULD'VE LAIN

TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES
SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE

ONLY THAN, MY HEART WOULD BE IN PEACE
WHEN SORROWS WILL HAVE IT SLAIN

Pain
Monday, June 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
IT'S ABOUT PAIN OF LOVE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 01 June 2015

A strange emotion that can bring ecstasy or misery. Thanks for sharing, Musawir Peace

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Soul Watcher 02 June 2015

Nice piece of poetry, thanks for sharing. I think it could be better not to write your text in uppercase, because as I know that the site doesn't accept it in this way, so it could be removed. TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE Very nice...

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Akhtar Jawad 22 September 2015

A touching poem, an impressive one.

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Anita Sharma 28 September 2015

very emotive description..liked

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Jessica Gabanyic 22 April 2020

Very emotional, and well written. Every word describes the pain you have gone through. Keep up the writing! -Jessica

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 September 2018

TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE ONLY THAN, MY HEART WOULD BE IN PEACE. the pain and the pain of love in deep desire and anxiety.. well pictured in a wonderful way. tony WHEN SORROWS WILL HAVE IT SLAIN

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Melvina Germain 08 November 2015

Pain woven through every word, a strong expression...10

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Nosheen Irfan 16 October 2015

I can relate to this poem on all levels. Really soul-touching.

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Liza Sudina 30 September 2015

NEVER FELT A WARM TOUCH BUT HARSH WORDS, USED TO STRAIN why so sad? very profound intense poem1

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