HOW LONG WOULD I OBTAIN
PAIN AND JUST PAIN
NEVER TASTED A DROP OF GLEE
BUT OFTEN SHOWERS IN SORROWS' RAIN
NEVER FELT A WARM TOUCH
BUT HARSH WORDS, USED TO STRAIN
WOULD THAT DIED WHEN CHILD
WOULD'VE NOT DYING IN CHAIN
HEART DEAD PEOPLE AROUND ME
TAKING MY EMOTIONS FOR INSANE
AAH! LIFE WOULD'VE BEEN BEAUTIFUL
BY MY SIDE, SHE WOULD'VE LAIN
TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES
SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE
ONLY THAN, MY HEART WOULD BE IN PEACE
WHEN SORROWS WILL HAVE IT SLAIN
Nice piece of poetry, thanks for sharing. I think it could be better not to write your text in uppercase, because as I know that the site doesn't accept it in this way, so it could be removed. TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE Very nice...
Very emotional, and well written. Every word describes the pain you have gone through. Keep up the writing! -Jessica
TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE ONLY THAN, MY HEART WOULD BE IN PEACE. the pain and the pain of love in deep desire and anxiety.. well pictured in a wonderful way. tony WHEN SORROWS WILL HAVE IT SLAIN
I can relate to this poem on all levels. Really soul-touching.
NEVER FELT A WARM TOUCH BUT HARSH WORDS, USED TO STRAIN why so sad? very profound intense poem1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A strange emotion that can bring ecstasy or misery. Thanks for sharing, Musawir Peace