Monday, November 13, 2017

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Compressed is the thoughts
-head, balloon with Helium
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

I try to do best; must remain neutral -heart and mind demand love for mankind -colourless, genderless, no class... Compassion for the mankind dazzles in the poem. It is time for the swords to come out -using gun, any tool, even bomb-suicide Wow, what a great theme you have worked upon! Loved to read thrice at a stretch. Great imagination, great passion for the well being of the human race. Thank you dear poet for the amazing poem. 10+++ for the poem, Regards. Subhas

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Nassy Fesharaki 20 November 2017

Thank you, you are kind and great.

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