Shifting Sands Comments

JoJo - A beautiful metaphor for a life slowly sinking. Let's hope you learn how to swim, very quickly. Seriously, I love this! Best wishes - Cheryl

JoAnn, the first steps are the hardest, once you've taken that first the rest slowly become easier. Think of some one's hand you want to hold and move forward to meet it. Said, poignant poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

You just have to ride those waves and also LOOK for the 'Footprints' in the sand, and know you're not alone.....sad but such a good poem......marci.xo

Sound the alarm and clear the beach... I guess thats what we have to do sometimes to save ourselves.. A true and well penned piece