Shooters! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Shooters!

Rating: 5.0


shoot the bird!
shoot the bird!
is hunting time

~please, shoot on the shooters~

but its just for fun!
it is just for fun!
i have one more bullet


Oh! my
he is dying, dying....
Oh! Dear!
that is the idea!

Thursday, November 14, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,hunting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
That's right, just shoot and all that will be left will be a great silence!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 November 2013

i read this twice, quickly, and laughed a little laugh at the end of the second reading. was that inappropriate, i wonder. and then i read the poet note. and now i'll read the 2 comments. yes, creative. who got shot? i thought you (or someone) was shooting at the shooters. i could say more, but it would not be worth much to anyone. and i am getting tired tonight AND i want to eat MORE! time to go. :) bri thanks PH M for sharing.

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Poetheart Morgan 17 November 2013

yes Poetess just trying to save one life!

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