Shooters! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Shooters!

Rating: 5.0


shoot the bird!
shoot the bird!
is hunting time

~please, shoot on the shooters~

but its just for fun!
it is just for fun!
i have one more bullet


Oh! my
he is dying, dying....
Oh! Dear!
that is the idea!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
That's right, just shoot and all that will be left will be a great silence!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 November 2013

i read this twice, quickly, and laughed a little laugh at the end of the second reading. was that inappropriate, i wonder. and then i read the poet note. and now i'll read the 2 comments. yes, creative. who got shot? i thought you (or someone) was shooting at the shooters. i could say more, but it would not be worth much to anyone. and i am getting tired tonight AND i want to eat MORE! time to go. :) bri thanks PH M for sharing.

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Poetheart Morgan 17 November 2013

yes Poetess just trying to save one life!

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