Short Cut Poem by A. Jayaprakash Jayaprakash Panicker

Short Cut

Rating: 5.0


Love to eat
Eat to be fat
Be fat
Be unfit
Do fast
or shed fat
thin the wallet
And be lost.

Life’s too fast
To be left
To rest
And thus rust
To dust.

Tame taste
Time'll wait.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 08 September 2008

A poem too short- but with it the hunger pangs will abort

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Antonio Liao 02 September 2008

wow, what makes the world so fat and wallet so thin....thats a real things happening today my friend....hope everybody will read this poem.... a reflective one....10 point..thank you

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2008

a poem too fast...but message will linger long n' last

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Rema Prasanna 09 July 2008

There is one more short cut... eat fat and pay for a workout shed fat..... interesting write..good Rema

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