Wednesday, July 9, 2008

Short Cut Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love to eat
Eat to be fat
Be fat
Be unfit
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A. Jayaprakash Jayaprakash Panicker
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Chitra - 08 September 2008

A poem too short- but with it the hunger pangs will abort

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Antonio Liao 02 September 2008

wow, what makes the world so fat and wallet so thin....thats a real things happening today my friend....hope everybody will read this poem.... a reflective one....10 point..thank you

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2008

a poem too fast...but message will linger long n' last

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Rema Prasanna 09 July 2008

There is one more short cut... eat fat and pay for a workout shed fat..... interesting write..good Rema

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A. Jayaprakash Jayaprakash Panicker

A. Jayaprakash Jayaprakash Panicker

Kovilloor, Trivandrum, Kerala
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