Short Poem 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem 1

Rating: 5.0


Romance like a summer breeze
Out for hiking, biking and roll on the meadows
All careless and carefree
Just hands in hand and walking side by side

Friday, March 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2019

Keeping hands side by side is nice and walking along with has great vision. Romance is like summer breeze. This is very interesting....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2019

The use of simile in the first line makes the poem endearing! A short and sweet romantic poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2019

A 10++++++++++++++++++++for the ratings/votings, Asim. This poem deserves that.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2019

WOW! Mesmerizing poem, looks Summer here, but we still have the COLD winter. I have enjoyed amazingly, dear Asim. So imaginable are your words. I like most your concluding words. WOW! Romance is in the air at your place.

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