Short Poem ~ In Taoist Style Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem ~ In Taoist Style

Rating: 5.0


Every bone holds a story of our restless mind
The complex pattern tells many a thing
The nature, the adaptation to change
The depth of our understanding
And the rocks we moved while alive.

Wednesday, October 27, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 28 October 2021

Fantastic write of Taoist style Asim ...like it...full score

2 0 Reply
Mamta 3 28 October 2021

Marvelous piece of writing. Full of wisdom.

2 0 Reply
Bharati Nayak 27 October 2021

Every bone holds a story of our restless mind The complex pattern tells many a thing---A short and beautiful poem of great depth.

2 0 Reply
Ricky Magnathen 27 October 2021

Excellent: The depth of our understanding And the rocks we moved while alive.

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success