Shortcomings In Sri Lanka Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Shortcomings In Sri Lanka

Rating: 5.0


For the stuff-up by security forces -
for their laziness -
for the thought they let the bombings happen -
for the way they'll be shaken up -

who didn't blow themselves up
and are caught

who were in on it

will soon appreciate the difference
between 'for' and 'on'
between 'in' and 'it'.

Pity who were not in on it
and are caught.

Shortcomings In Sri Lanka
Tuesday, April 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: laziness,murder,pity,security,terrorism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Pity who were not in on it
who'll be in for it.

Easter bombings 21.4.2019
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 April 2019

For the stuff-up by security forces, laziness will go away and difference will be soon appreciated. This poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Douglas Scotney

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Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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