Shoulder Tattoo Comments

Ah, is there much better in life than kissing in the rain? ... The yearning in this poem is palpable and bittersweet. Thanks for this.

Baudelaire nor Verlaine couldn't have said it any better, I think. Still, did you have to mention tattoos (shudder) ? It's enough to want one to slug down Absinthe. Fine write, though. A bit of a thrill is a shudder. Too much of a thrill means jail. You seem to be doing just fine, not crossing the line. Love and concern, Will

The thought of one of these being hammered into my skin gives me the shivers, but they are there to stay so maybe they are worth it if they trigger a memory of something nice in another's heart. Nice write Uriah. Love Ernestine XXX

Haunting and elegaic like a whisper in the dusk. Lovely work.Uriah. Kindest regards, Sandra

je suis triste parce que de cette poem, Uriah. mais romantique!