Friday, November 20, 2009

Show Me Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take me aside and show me love that over-rides
Doubt, is non-judgemental, a love that finds ways
Of refusing to fight, believes in providing
Reasons for misbehaviour and, yes, prays
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Fay Slimm
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Ian Bowen 09 December 2009

Fay, loved this one with a passion. You are like a good wine...10/10 Regards, Ian

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Eyan Desir 04 December 2009

Very nice and romantic Fay 10s

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Catrina Heart 03 December 2009

wonderful inspiring piece.........Great! ! !

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David Harris 21 November 2009

Fay, a beautiful and uplifting poem of love. Loved it. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 20 November 2009

Yes must agree with this well written piece top marks for this Fay 10 Daniel

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Patti Masterman 20 November 2009

This is such a beautiful, peaceful idea in here. There are people in the world who live in just that way.I think it is that the ones who don't are always stirring up such a ruckus that it is difficult to ever break even, lol. But I'm sure someday that is coming.

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Sandra Fowler 20 November 2009

The value of unconditional love cannot be overestimated.May you be blessed for having the courage of your convictions. Your light is shining. Love, SandraX

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Meggie Gultiano 20 November 2009

Show me a love that outhshines hate, and above All, a love that dares to forgive and reprieve. Faces life with understanding, feels delight In all that is worthy of being thought good. ........................ Great verse. Wonderful to read.you have shown the best face love can give.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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