No place to hide, no pace to glide,
No stone to turn, no oil to burn,
No man to blame, no fire to flame,
No Thunder to steal, no wounds to heal,
No Phoenix to rise, no Sibyl so wise!
Call it nada or nil, it’s moving to stand still.
Thick with smoke and thin with emptiness,
Dispersed dreams are shreds of nothingness.
a well penned write, Subhra. Thanks for sharing and WELCOME at P.H.
You have done dispersed dreams justice with your description, Subhra. Thanks
Thank you so much, Sir. Am really glad and honored that you appreciated my effort. Regards.
Thank you so much, Sir. I am really glad and honored that you appreciated my effort. Regards.
'Dispersed dreams are shreds of nothingness' but the poem also brings so much ecstasy by way of its immense poetic charm, great rhyming, idiom and a spotless imagery. Thanks, Subhra Roy. No place to hide, no pace to glide, No stone to turn, no oil to burn,
These words of inspiration mean a lot to a newbie like me! Thank you so much sir for appreciating my maiden poem. Regards.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully written.Thanks for sharing.