Shut her
Life is no joke
No one can stake
Simply because he has infatuation
Life is cruel and severs connection
You are giving no time
To settle for future time
Permanent bond or relationship is serious thing
No one has control of happenings
If it exists on both the sides
One must decide
And take initiative
And put the thing in real perspective
We have seen many cases
That comes up in haste and breaks
Life turns into tragedy
And turns into dreamy project
The proposal has to match with seriousness
Else there will be no sense
The parents may think of not allowing her
To mingle with and shut her for moving further
Permanent bond or relationship is serious thing no one has control over it.. the perception carries depth.. your poem is very informative with a precise urge to the human society in general.. I liked your penultimate stanza most..a wonderful piece of work ..10
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The proposal has to match with seriousness Else there will be no sense The parents may think of not allowing her To mingle with and shut her for moving further
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice! Keep writing and responding to other posts. Jasneet Kaur, Nov 06,2017