Side Affects Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Side Affects

Rating: 5.0


I tipped up the glass
and drank you in sideways.
I felt like a doxy
making her pass.

You in a glance
picked up my signal...
before very long
then asked me to dance.

Sally Plumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 October 2014

and you lived happily ever after? Affects or Effects? i don't really know, so i'm asking. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'm glad this american looked up doxy: dox·y 'däkse/ noun archaic noun: doxy; plural noun: doxies a lover or mistress. a prostitute. ..............................interesting. i liked the rhyming. thanks for sharing, young lady! bri ;)

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Brian Johnston 07 March 2014

Yeah you were right! I liked it! : -)

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James Timothy Jarrett 17 April 2013

Short and sweet. Succinct.

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Louis Cecile 07 March 2010

This simply draws me to want to know more, but I also feel I know what will happen. Well crafted poem.

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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