(This was rather my first poem)
You kept a long silence
I too maintained the same sense!
What an impasse...
incising two loving hearts!
Our next meeting may be really exciting!
But alas, waiting is excruciating!
Yes, at times this silence becomes more eloquent than words! I had read somewhere - the mighty Himalayas stood thundering in its silence! -Raj Nandy
You say a lot with a few words with this one. What is noticeable here are all the words with s sounds.
You have an excellent ability to evoke a myriad of feeling in a short verse.I wonder if you, (like me) , have English as a second language. Ngaio Beck
in silence lava flows in silence cosmos runs in silence we live we die in cresendo! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very concise and well said - silence is a powerful thing Ruthy