Silent Love Poem by Sathya Narayana

Silent Love

Rating: 5.0


Could say nothing
when I met her last time
in the deafening din
of our shying hearts
demurring minds.

This time...
we both
amidst the roses red
and bright chrysanthemums
under the green bower
stood silent watching each other.

I heard the bussing sounds
of umpteen lips of gentle breeze
touching her forehead
and beheld
an annoyed strand of curly hair
dangling across her face
as if brushing aside the mischievous zephyr.
Then lo came sailing through
the flowing winds
a withered leaf of last Autumn
and fell on her feet,
as if she waited all the season
for this moment of salvation.

Suddenly a cool drizzle
embraced us both with thousand hands
and the sky winked a lightening!
This time too
could say nothing...
but waded my hesitant steps
through lazy silence
and grinding quandary
and my hands folded around her.

In the yonder a wrinkled cloud growled low
and from a distant bough
a warble crooned some hurried tunes
looking around with rolling eyes.
I smiled at her...
she smiled at me...
we needed no more words!

Monday, October 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,smile,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 16 October 2017

A sweet poem of love. Beautifully rendered.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 February 2018

A beautiful love poem with a smooth flow and sweetness. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 18 February 2018

Beautiful poem! The delicate images and expression of deep sentiments are exceptional! Congratulations!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2018

It's a lovely poem! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as POD!

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Bharati Nayak 18 February 2018

In the yonder a wrinkled cloud growled low and from a distant bough a warble crooned some hurried tunes looking around with rolling eyes. I smiled at her... she smiled at me... we needed no more words! - - - - - -Silence speaks where words can not.- - - An exquisitely beautiful poem! !

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Lyn Paul 18 February 2018

When your hearts beat as ones, sharing thought and no words needed it is a special love. Treasure your Silent Love

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 February 2018

You have successfully spoken all the alphabets of love in this beautiful love poem. Thanks dear for the sharing. Congratulations for being picked the members POD.

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Sabita Sahoo 18 February 2018

Yes sir, it's a poem worth being picked.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 February 2018

Beautiful, subtle expressions of love, that require no words. Brilliant poem. Congratulations Sathya Narayana. You deserve this honour with top marks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 February 2018

It is a beautiful poem on love and smile having touching expression. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as poem of the day.

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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