rave of ripples holding delight
very wishes of thrill hues hedonic
sky smears blue by beams of moon
night as redolent of betiding glow
breath riffles on cave of crooning
where is reeks lost to cry of dream
stars yet winks into void by darkness
bliss never loses strength of heaven
Earth never says its woes by night
time yet heaves glow from green
joy still unveil beauty from rucks
life needs to awe by resilience of hope
as love of tomorrow redounds to reel
dream may not forsake desire by snow
heart never fails by roaring clouds
moment yet unmiffed by shadow of light
as gleams of silence heaves the night.
excellent.....hmmm keep writing in silence by the night. silent whisper brings wordless and endless emotional moment, as its silence by the night alway and forever............. path are same but mission are different walking in silence by the night. is lonely persons wish in silence by the night..........
dreams that heave in the silence of the night wowwwwwwww nice metaphors very good write as always 10+++++++++ anjali
really nice...really meaningful.. touching.... as dreams continue to illuminate in spite of darkeness happiness crawls to beat sadness as hopes emerged despite discouragement .your piece expressed within its silence... making it more understandable...(smile) you have successfully expressed the feeling....with a great impact... like dawn and dusk....fighting to win...fighting to rule... this is really nice....as always... but this touches me a lot...one of my favorites from your many great poems... 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia
stars yet winks into void by darkness bliss never loses strength of heaven liked these expressions in your poem: winking stars, bliss.. heaven .. etc. thank you fo rsharing
I sense something in your poems And almost all the titles are nice um.....but I'm incapable of understanding your poems, and I am unable to put a finger on what little I can sense, and confused whether I can sense it at all
Poets are usually fond of silence but when it is of night, silence is mystified... U hv rightly chosen the words for ur poem.Liked it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
amazing poem indeed! ! !