Silence envelopes my world tonight.
Quiet asserts itself, mists my sky
And lies heavy. Stars are dull, blighted
By gloom, and like them I cannot rely
On clear light. Your love has now flouted
My own, surrounded by doubt, before
Long I shall be hoarse by this shouting
At quiet. You are gone, and I am alone.
As silence reigns, my grief is showing.
Wonderful poignant write Fay...you make it come alive...Fi 10++++
Beautifully.... The loneliness well operates on poetry, Fay, 10... Tsira
Good-bye is one of the saddest words in the English language. This one is poignant, Fay.10/10 for you.my gifted friend. Love, SandraX
The state of being dominated by the silence is very well narrated in this poem. In such states silence holds the royal powers and really can seed through the imaginaitons of humankind that sometimes make one a nonresponsive sculpt if it overwhelms.....The poem describes the prevailing sadness in a very wonderful manner.......10/10
This evokes sadness in me as always you bring me right into your work. Let's hope the mist clears very soon. 10 Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deep, sensitive and literally poetic.10.