Silent Call (For Maurice) Poem by Danny Draper

Silent Call (For Maurice)

Rating: 4.9


In the hum between beast and machine
At rest on bunk too awake to dream
Whale voices clear and clean
Pinged the wall of the submarine
Calls stretched, shrieked, rang and fell
Absorbing echoes off the hull
Reverberated, amplified and vibrated
Air within the shell,
Skilled navigators devoid of sight
Aware without acknowledgement
Secretive and cautious
Each to protect their own,
Passed inside the darkness,
To parts
That will remain to each but known.

5-6/12/2004

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for my brother Maurice a retired sub-mariner after his story of listening to whales while lying in his bunk in a submerged submarine.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Nec 03 September 2012

Like Charles James said...whoa...the song of the whales is hauntingly beautiful....Nice piece here Danny! ! !

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Ruth Walters 22 August 2012

This brings home the experience, the loneliness, spookiness Whale voices clear and clean Pinged the wall of the submarine

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Douglas Scotney 21 August 2012

and yet, there are reports from the early days of attempted matings, adoption of the little ones, rude worship of the big.

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Valerie Dohren 20 August 2012

Whales are wonderful creatures, highly intelligent - interesting and excellent write Danny.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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