The crow has reconciled to its fate
Stopped flapping its wings
Sitting on the window sill
The silence in the meadow is eerie
Spring is mute around stones
As in meditation air is still
Sweeping sound at the doors and
Scent of night oozing from her
Body makes the crow get lost
In a thought that one day upon flat
Leaves it would scrawl down
A poem on love and trust
Powerful imagery here, Tiku. I love the visual of the air still as in meditation. Also the scent of night oozing from the black body of the crow is so inventive and vivid. Of course, the unexpected finale is satisfying and yet causes deeper contemplation. Bravo!
Honored. Thanks very much Sir for giving time to my poem and wonderful comment. My regards.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Reconciliation in love is difficult but ground realities of life force us to reconcile in love even. It's a beautiful poem.
You are right Sir. Thanks for reading and comment. Regards.