Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

Silent Pain - Poem by Vishal Sharma

though I am not
before your eyes
my heart is always
It hankers for just one look
but O my dear life
remember this rhyme
strongest is the time
we are just its slaves
we do,
what we are are ordered to do
our time is gone
never would be our love
we hence take the promise
our love will shine for forever
brighter than the sun
as calm as the moon
as pure as the dove
that is our love...

Comments about Silent Pain by Vishal Sharma

  • Unwritten Soul (3/30/2013 1:18:00 AM)

    A short write and too short for sweet write, but it has bitter a bit, still nice to feel_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (3/28/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    Lovely write with such wise lines, I really enjoyed it! (Report) Reply

  • (3/28/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    end is weak. especially the last verse. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 28, 2013

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