Silly Wishes Poem by boukhalfa laouari

This is very nice, some of your English is not perfect but it adds to the charm of it, keep writing, Best wishes, Lynda

you're richer than wealth..........beautier than diamonds..................but with hollow heart................melted like an ice-cream..............

I really like this one, it kinda sucks wanting something so bad and to be afraid at the same time but thats life. Keep writing, Aimee

I really like this one.. it's so humane, and it's just... beautiful..

The contrast is striking. It is simple but in its way, profound. I like it.

You are right, you are a poet, and of course a human that free to feel to wish and to dream...No silly wishes here because it was what your heart said to your life to be, to have.. In our life always we wish for something, and i dont see any of yours are silly one..though it just a hope, it can be a guide for one thing achieved...so do wishes as much as you need and never look back...and go toward it_Soul

that's what happens in most cases, we follow our hearts'desire, we dream, we wish...and then we are struck by reality thunder...it knocks us down, and nothing is left of a poet but his words brilliant write

tank sir for all this word I find them very interesting I hope for you good luck for every think and I am looking for your words.....

I liked the format used. Great use of words too!

Last two lines of this poem is very moving. Excellent.