Thursday, August 13, 2009

Silvered Light. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Phosphorescent bands of silver bright
Across romantic
................. night-borne
Still and silent sea,
...
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 14 August 2009

moonlight shone throughout the night it also shone on Fay dousing her with moonbeams to last throughout her day

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Yelena M. 13 August 2009

i adore the construction of your poem, Fay..read like incantation of eternal light, the language is chosen to mesmerise the reader, thanks for sharing. A.

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Carol Gall 13 August 2009

wonderful very much so 10 10

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Lawrence Beck 13 August 2009

This is a wonderful poem, very nicely written. Larry Beck

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 August 2009

binding souls as friends for life....beautiful...the 2 sanza has immense depth...it is jost not about nature...lovely

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Catrina Heart 13 August 2009

wonderful poem written........translucent effervescent piece....10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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