Simple Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Simple

Rating: 2.8


Love, everlasting
Eternal
transcendent
tear dropp in the ocean
becomes one
limitations of flesh
cuts the cord
of its eternal flow
so we may say
how come
reality is harsh
illusion simple
choices made
another tear dropp falls
still one
and always will be
because
Divinity is
meek
Love endless

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jameel Ahmed Ansari 29 July 2012

nicely penned.beautiful and elegant

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Heather Wilson 28 July 2012

Beautiful words, reading brings such pleasure. thank you.

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Hamid Negah 25 July 2012

really, I enjoy reading your poems, thanks a lot.

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Poetic serenity & smooth structural fluxion in forward movement, here, Kasia...Superb work, young lady, indeed! ~FjR~

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Valerie Dohren 24 July 2012

Love endless. - another lovely poem Kasia.

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