Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 411,737 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Simple Language - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Poets merely explain
Hard facts and remain
So close to the beating heart
To take care and offer solace in form of natural art

Only eyes know magic
There are no rules or basis
Someone may like black girl
And go with her quality in turn

It is nature that attracts
And speaks in open act
Person tries to woe
And roams around to prove true

He may have liking
But real intent is not striking
The girl is unaware about one side]
She is in dilemma to decide

Poets have simple language
It appeals to the people of all ages
Love is not bound by any barrier
It makes person always happier

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Comments about Simple Language by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2015 8:50:00 PM)


    WELCOME N THANKS...hirley Macclean · 3 mutual friends
    We are ordinary when gone

    There is no one there to welcome
    no garland
    no red carpet treatment
    no special coffee
    no juices for me
    no milk no sugar is needed

    but by then we are all just a memory
    hanging about a tall Eucalyptus tree
    far in the distant ocean
    or simmering horizon
    they all ask fast
    has the sun set at last?
    I hear someone say in my ear
    though deaf be I may
    sweet guy don't cry be happy
    no cancer injections now for thee

    and there will be no regrets
    as you leave your mind
    the earlier you go
    all memories will be left behind

    they’ll all be finally happy
    do you know why?
    b'coz of you now
    they’re all in fathomless debt
    for your death have no regret

    pass away as quickly as you may
    what's the point now to stay?
    just like me fade away
    come be my immortal friend everyday

    come straightaway
    I can't wait any longer
    than sun set today...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2015 8:49:00 PM)


    Dan Ankers · Friends with Anasandra Azlin and 16 others
    love is boundless and cares not for social norms
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  • Rajnish Manga (3/29/2015 1:29:00 PM)


    Love is not captive of any premeditated notions. This has been explained in various ways by poets through the ages. I love the way you have put it down:
    Love is not bound by any barrier / It makes person always happier. Thanks, Sir.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2015 11:06:00 AM)


    1 share

    Roy Mark Azanza Corrales
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2015 11:06:00 AM)


    Hasmukh Mehta welcome for sharing
    Roy Mark Azanza Corrales via Hasmukh Mehta
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2015 10:48:00 AM)


    Poets merely explain
    Hard facts and remain
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2015



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