Amber Green

Rookie - 0 Points (May 26,1989 / Georgia)

Simple Mistake- Not Grammacially Correct - Poem by Amber Green

Physical pain is actually felt
As I try my hardest not to cry
I swallow the emotions I am dealt
When you forgot to say goodbye
Pain is felt through out my heart
As I wonder why you left me
A simple mistake is tearing me apart
Because I realize now we'll never be
You told me to call back and i will
But I am not going to cry
I will not let myself spill
But inside I am wondering why.


Comments about Simple Mistake- Not Grammacially Correct by Amber Green

  • (1/23/2007 9:16:00 AM)


    who cares about the spelling if you get the emotion behind it, very good poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/11/2006 1:33:00 PM)


    Grammar Shmammar, this poem is perfect without it!
    Oh gosh I know what you mean!
    ~Amber~
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  • (8/4/2006 12:23:00 PM)


    i will not let myself spill

    You hit it... great line. That word 'spill' describes so very well how i feel sometimes... I'm working on a poem called 'Spilling' at the moment. At least I THINK that's what it'll be called.

    wonderful write, darling. Keep it up.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 4, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 21, 2010


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